Thursday, November 5, 2015

Think About the Genre in Class Lab

Taking Positions:
  • Who will win the Seahawks game.
  • Who to start on my fantasy football team.
  • Who to vote for in the Primary Elections.
  • Whether it's considered equality if you hit a girl.
  • Who will win the World Series.
Other People's Positions:
  • Who to vote for in the Primary Elections.
  • TV/Movie shows liked.
  • Take in or take out dinner.
  • The position of no violence.

    Page 66 in class lab:

    Gun control memes:

    https://llwproductions.files.wordpress.com/2013/04/meme-deer-shooting-back.jpg
    This appeals to us because it is a funny way to say someones position. They used a joke, and a picture of a man everyone knows to make a meme about gun control. To support its position it asks a question, and then answers it with a punch line that delivers their stance. For a serious audience we would change it to saying "No one needs 30 rounds in their gun, because deer can not shoot back.". To change its medium we would switch the position and explain why so many rounds are needed.

    https://stophittingyourbrother.files.wordpress.com/2013/01/gun-control-memes.jpg
    On this website there are two different memes that have two different positions. The fist one has a quote from Ronald Reagan saying how he feels about guns. He said that it was okay to have guns for self defense but a machine gun is too much and no one really needs one in their home. The second meme has the word guns repeated several times next to phases that represent what we use to defend things like our homes and president. At the bottom it reads "We defend our children with a sign that reads 'this is a GUN FREE ZONE'". The quote from a historic person works because people trust his opinion and they logically can follow what he says. The second meme speaks to peoples emotions because their children or niece is not being protected while at school or in certain environments. To change them we would make them either appeal to someones comedic genre or have them be more serious depending on the audience.

    http://www.quickmeme.com/img/5d/5d3a151b7d0d3b9e0bf5fd0f87d5023c63d74801655090fcf02f5579247c51f1.jpg
    This memes is a picture of a man trying not to laugh while pretending to think. Around him it says "That Facebook post really make me think about my stance on gun control, said no one ever".  This appeals to us because it is funny and relatable. Really it means that it is hard to sway peoples opinions, but when you're on Facebook and something about gun control comes up you kind of laugh and scroll past. The thing we would change is maybe using a picture of someone we know. We would change the content to change the medium. We would make the meme have a position on gun control itself.

    Bibliography:
    Michelle. Cartoon. Motley News, 6 April. 2013.
    Sallah. Cartoon. Stop Hitting Your Brother. 31 January. 2013
    Quick Memes. Cartoon. Quick meme.com.

Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Save Water

Summary: Water waste leads to a lack of clean drinking water.

Paraphrase: Save water, save the world. Gallons of water are wasted every year, causing shortages in clean water. These shortages lead to several deaths every year. Places like California have gone through droughts that call for a need to safe water for cleaning drinking.

Quote “Thirsty?”

Textual analysis paper questions 1-7

  1. The companies that publish the ads are, PETA, Freedom For Animals, and Mercy For Animals.
  2. These adds are intended for human beings in general.
  3. Because these organizations clearly do not want anyone to mistreat animals in any way. They use their ad techniques in a way that doesn't appeal to one group of people. 
  4. The purpose of these is to make people think about what they do. The creators of these ads are wanting people to realize that maybe the way they treat animals is wrong.
  5. These people are clearly animals lovers, and believe that animals should have the same rights that humans do. They are working towards their purpose by getting the word out through ads, and making people think twice about what their doing.
  6. Its obvious when they say things like "If you wouldn't wear your dog.... please don't wear any fur." Its basically saying why wear any animal if you wouldn't wear your own.
  7. "Stop the mistreatment, and cruelty of animals today, by using ethos, pathos, and logos to appeal to us."

Thursday, October 22, 2015

Understanding Writing Analyses

What we now understand about analyzing writing:
You need to follow certain steps, in order.
You need to know what questions to ask.
You need to know what the point of the analysis is.
How to identify patterns in data and info.
You need to know how to connect to readers.
You need to look at text and see how it supports your claim.
You need to know how authors establish authority .
You need to know what emotions the text appeals to.
You need to know that analysis has to be instructional and informational.

How "Stay Sweet As You Are" fits the criteria:

The author uses a clear point to establish the topic sentence. He claimed that advertisements aimed at women encourage them to like beauty products that reinforce a male's role in their life.  He identified patterns in his data by analyzing the advertisements. He specifically picked apart ads that used men to reinforce the product. In the soap ad he proved that the soap was showing that women who want to get married need to have clear skin and even if they have wit and grace men wont be attracted to them. He looked at the text in the ads and explained how this supported his claim. He also knew what the emotions in the advertisements were and showed that they were trying to shame women into buying the products. He also is informative in his analysis by sticking to his claim, and using three different ads to prove his point. The essay "Stay Sweet as You Are" definitely fits the criteria to be an analysis essay.

Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Learning How to Read


Have you ever wondered what your most important educational tool is? Well I believe that the ability to read is the biggest advantage in life. Knowing how to read can help lay the ground work for the rest of your future. With the ability to read comes the ability to write. With these skills come numerous amounts of potential to thrive in today’s society. For example, I am writing my first college essay, and my writing skills are all directly linked to my reading ability. Without learning how to read, I never would have gone to kindergarten, and I definitely would not be where I am today.

This day was going to be like every other Saturday. I was going to get up, brush my teeth, and then go downstairs for breakfast. Saturdays were always my favorite. The whole family was home, and my mom always cooked breakfast on the weekend. As I walked down the newly carpeted stairs, I could smell my favorite breakfast ever, waffles! The aroma grabbed me and yanked me down the stairs, the strong smell of vanilla floated me into kitchen and plopped me on a stool at the breakfast bar. My mom knew me so well, she had already pulled the peanut butter and syrup out of the pantry. I instantly grabbed the freshest waffle, threw it on my plate and smothered it in peanut butter. Next came the waterfall of syrup creating a lake on the plate. As I took my first bite my mom said, “How would you like to learn how to read today?”

            Perplexed, I swallowed my enormous bite and responded, “Read? What do you mean?”

My mother tried to come up with something creative to trick me, “Like instead of me reading you a story at night, you could read one to yourself. It’s so much fun!”

I questioned my mom’s new idea, “By myself? Like I could read Magic Tree House every day? That would be awesome!” Little did I know it would be so difficult.

My mom continued with her weekend routine, she cleaned the kitchen, and washed the dishes. My father was forced to brush the dog, and then proceed to clean the carpets to make sure there were no more “Buster Bunnies.” After all the morning activities were out of the way, my mom pulled a box out of the closet with the words “Hooked on Phonics.” I had no idea what the words meant but I was about to find out!

In order to get me to focus, my mom brought me into our empty living room and opened up the Hooked on Phonics program. The freshly cleaned carpets felt so nice on my hands and feet that I almost fell asleep. My mom kept prompting me, running through the alphabet. I didn’t realize this was going to be such a long process, only being able to learn the sounds of uppercase and lowercase letters. I knew most of the letters, but didn’t really know what they sounded like. But this wasn’t even the hardest part, Saturday was long but pretty easy. Sunday was going to be difficult, on Sunday we started putting the letters together.

Knowing the sounds of letters was a good start, but I didn’t know many words past mom and dad. My mom kept saying, “Sound it out honey.” I didn’t really know what that meant. I felt the need to put the information I learned Saturday, to use on Sunday. I started reading words like ingredients to a cake, “There is a c, an a, and a t. Cccc-aaaaaaa-t. Cat! It’s a cat!” It felt so good to get a word right, but I got frustrated easily with words I couldn’t figure out. It was so easy to want to quit when I got words wrong. I felt so disappointed with myself, I thought my mom felt the same way, but she was always so positive and encouraging. When she could tell I was really down on myself she said to think about it and then she disappeared. I was confused because she had left, but I did what she said, I kept trying to figure out the words. My mom came back a minute or two later with popsicles! My favorite flavor is blue raspberry, it’s so sweet, yet it is also a bit sour, giving a wide range of flavor. Plus the popsicle left a vibrant blue on my lips and tongue, which for some reason made me feel like a super hero. My mom knew I loved the blue raspberry flavored popsicles. Holding up a fierce blue popsicle, so she prompted me by saying, “If you can get this word right I’ll give you half of this popsicle.”

I was determined and focused on getting that popsicle, so I sounded out the word again, “t-rr-u-cckk. Truck. Truck!” my mom then split the popsicle so there was half on each stick and gave me one half.

Trying to keep me attentive, my mom said, “Good job Nash. Now I’ll give you the other half if you can read this whole sentence.”

Now this was a sentence that I had seen before, but I wasn’t sure what it said. Pondering the sentence, I got frustrated, but I knew I just needed to stay relaxed. I had already tried to read the sentence four times already, every time getting hung up on what my mom called the “verb.” I knew I was talking about my dog, but what did he do? Looking at Buster, thinking about what he does every day, I remembered him playing around and jumping all over the place. I then took one more try at the sentence, I thought over every word very carefully. “The dog jumped on the bed.” My mother looked ecstatic! She was so proud, it was the first sentence I had ever read. She gave me the second half of the popsicle plus, she said I could have another one after dinner!

            I was only able to read very basic sentences, but it was a work in progress. I tried reading everything after that Sunday, cereal boxes, magazines, and newspapers. Anything I could find that had words, I would try and read from top to bottom. Every weekend we would practice reading. Every time I worked on reading, it became easier and quicker.  Learning to read seemed like such a small success, but as I look back, learning to read set the foundation for my education. Learning to read led to writing, then came kids’ books. Next came books for school. High school came around and I had textbooks to read. Now I’m in college and I find myself recalling this skill I learned almost twelve years ago.

            Without this experience I would never have done well in school. I would have never been able to read books for school, and definitely never would have been able to write a strong, cohesive essay. I credit a lot of my education to my caring parents. My parents have always been by myside, helping me when they can, and pushing me to be the best student I can be. So for that, I thank you mom and dad, you mean the world to me!

Thursday, October 15, 2015

Analyzing Texts


Think About Your Own Use of Analysis

 
Small Decision
Large Decision
Week
I decided to eat Special K for breakfast, to maintain a good diet.
This decision made for a better eating lifestyle.
I decided to start a 14 week workout plan created by the Toronto Blue Jays.
This choice will help me get back into top notch shape for baseball.
Month
I decided to go to Klahowya’s homecoming with Jacob Henson. Deciding to go to the dance has stretched my social horizons.
I have applied to five different colleges to attend next year as a freshman.
Applying to these schools has set a plan for my educational future.
Year
I decided to by my first pair of Levi’s jeans.
The Levi’s I bought have expanded my wardrobe immensely with only one addition.
I decided to attend Olympic College as a Running Start student.
The decision to start college a year earlier will help with my college debt, being able to get a big chunk of college credits out of the way while still in high school.

 

Look For Analysis in Everyday Use

I analyzed to websites, Travelocity and Trip Advisor. I felt more comfortable with Travelocity because I felt like it was a more thorough search of what you are looking for. Both had a good search bar, but Travelocity felt more in depth, asking about number of people and number of beds. Trip Advisor almost felt like it was hiding its tabs. I felt I could plan a complete trip more easily with Travelocity, it had everything from the flight, the car rentals, cruises, and even things to do where you’re at. While Trip Advisor felt like you had to do everything one at a time, and not plan everything as one big trip. Both sites had great reviews, which helps immensely in deciding which airline to take, or what hotel to stay at. With the reviews, both sites had pictures but Trip Advisor’s seemed fake and photo shopped, while Travelocity seemed more realistic to what you would see while at your destination. With Travelocity, they have great coupons on the home page ready for you to use, where Trip Advisor has you find codes to enter in at checkout. I feel that if I was Trip Advisor, I would have a similar homepage with coupons out in the open, along with maybe having customers take pictures of the hotel for the reviews. As far as Travelocity goes, I know what site to use to plan my senior trip to San Diego California.

Taking Stock of Your Writing


1.       “Moral of Your Story”     The moral of my narrative was that learning to read can lay the foundation for the rest of your education and life.

2.       My audience would be my professor, classmates, and followers of my blog. I knew at least for my professor’s sake, I needed to have a certain level of maturity, yet also it was a narrative about learning how to read so it had to have somewhat of a childish charm.

3.       I received great feedback from my peers on how to make sentences flow a little better and to make them sound a bit more interesting. I will be using these great tips when I get a chance to edit my narrative.

4.       Before writing this narrative, I never really thought about the importance of learning how to read.

5.       My introduction paragraph felt very strong, coupled with strong descriptive imagery.